Elsevier|论文撰写

从框架到表达:论文结构与常见句型集锦

想要提高论文整体的语言水平和可读性,需要我们在结构、句式、用词等各个方面用心打磨。一篇好的论文往往有着严谨专业的结构和简洁明了的句式。严谨的结构可以让我们的论文逻辑清晰,而简明的句式则让内容更易于理解。

今天,我们特别整理了一些论文写作中常见的结构、句型,以及相关案例,希望能助力各位研究者提升论文语言水平,打造严谨简明的论文,提升论文的发表几率。

 

论文的基本结构与内容1-3

大多数期刊对论文的结构都有着严格的规定。论文最常见的结构是IMRAD结构,包括引言(Introduction)、方法(Methods)、结果(Results)和讨论(Discussion)四个主要部分。国际医学期刊编辑委员会(ICMJE)曾表示:“ IMRAD并不是被随意制定出来的,而是能够直观展示科学发现过程的一种文章结构。 ” 

 

让我们通过下面的表格来进一步拆解IMRAD结构以及每个部分下的内容要求:

标题
  • 用一句话或几个词来简单概括论文内容。
  • 可以是研究的主题、地点或使用的具体方法。
摘要
  • 对研究论文的一段总结。
  • 概括了研究背景、研究问题、使用的方法和材料、重要的发现和结论。
引言
  • 说明论文的研究背景,为论文的主要观点做准备。
  • 定位研究主题,说明计划解决的问题,并强调该研究的重要性与相关性。
材料和方法
  • 解释研究技术和环境条件。
  • 详尽展示当其他研究人员复制、验证该研究时所必须了解的细节。
结果
  • 列出研究发现的重要结果。
  • 用词简明扼要。不要含糊不清、模棱两可。
  • 用文字、图表说明。
讨论
  • 阐明你的发现将如何推进研究进程或填补现有的知识空白,以及引言中所提到的假设是否最终得到了证实。
参考文献
  • 列出论文撰写时所参考的所有文献。
  • 务必严格按照格式要求进行罗列。
  • 常见参考文献格式有:MLA(美国现代语言协会论文指导格式)、APA (美国心理学家协会刊物准则)、Harvard System(哈佛论文引用系统)和MHRA(由英国现代人文研究协会制定的格式)。

 

精彩句型案例展示

研究者撰写研究论文的主要目的就是直观呈现所做的工作和成果。因此,我们建议研究者们尽可能多地使用简洁明了的句型,避免华丽辞藻的堆砌。下面,我们总结了一些分别适用于论文中不同部分的精彩句型案例。

 

标题4-6

  • Evaluation of…using…

……使用……评估

  • Risk Factors for Oral Cancer in Adults…

成人口腔癌的风险因素……

  • Development of Deep Learning Models to…

开发深度学习模型以……

摘要7-9

  • Y is the most common complication among patients post-surgery…

Y是术后患者最常见的并发症……

  • Artificial intelligence models can perform XYZ function, but they need more training data to be accurate.

人工智能模型可以执行XYZ功能,但它们需要更多的训练数据才能准确。

  • In this study, we assess the safety and efficacy of ABC.

在本研究中,我们评估了ABC的安全性和有效性。

引言10-12

  • 1 in 5 adults suffers from…

五分之一的成年人患有……

  • The effects of climate change are becoming increasingly evident with time.

随着时间的推移,气候变化的影响变得越来越明显。

  • However, we need more evidence to support this claim.

然而,我们需要更多的证据来支持这一说法

  • The aim of this study was to…

这项研究的目的是……

材料和方法13-15

  • The training data sets included images of…

训练数据集包括……

  • Data was analyzed using Python/SPSS/XYZ software…

数据分析使用了Python、SPSS、XYZ软件……

  • FADS1/2 knockout mice were used as test animals, while C5BL6 mice with intact FADS1/2 were used as controls.

FADS1/2基因敲除的小鼠被用来做测试对照FADS1/2基因完整的C5BL6小鼠。

结果16-18

  • We found that XYZ negatively regulated…

我们发现XYZ……

  • The silencing of PQRS led to an increase in XYZ in normal mice…

PQRS的沉默导致正常小鼠中XYZ基因的增加……

  • The DNN model was accurately able to identify voids in the material and…

DNN模型能够准确地识别材料中的空洞和……

讨论19,20

  • Therefore, this work suggests that…

因此,这项研究表明……

  • In vivo studies are necessary to confirm the effect of ABC in animals and humans…

为了证实ABC在动物和人类中的作用,我们有必要进行体内研究……

  • This DNN model can be used to accurately perform XYZ function.

DNN模型可用于准确执行XYZ功能。

 

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